The paper said not guilty, but the truth, the real truth, was a secret, deep down inside my heart. Locked up like I should have been. I pulled out my cigar, Cuban and custom made. The smoke was grey and pleasing and it soothed my nerves like a kind of music one hears down in their soul. My suspensio...

<t>I'm having trouble at the moment. But here's an excerpt from my story I'm currently revising<br/> <br/> <br/> His whole body trembled as he traced his tender fingertips across my forehead. This circular gesture which he repeated often in a passionate manner made my whole body moist with beads of ...

Alright. Here it is. I've been feeling scared but I feel like I can post a small excerpt and see how it is so far. Any criticism is great! Be as tough and gritty as possible. No bars boxing! Put the gloves on! Jim got into the car and shut the door, where Jerry was looking at him with a strong smile...