@mary

No im not reading anything on the subject right now but i might check out the bio section next time i go to the library

I look through my textbooks every now and then when im bored though, they have some good info in them

Thanks for the feedback. Its kind of funny because you preaching to the choir a little with most of the critiques. For the rough draft it was all about momentum; i wanted to get the whole thing written as fast as possible. When i do the final draft i am going to correct everything you mentioned and ...

Theres the first 3 chapters off the rough draft

First three chapters of Threshold Part 1, cut from the rough draft     THRESHOLD PART 1             BY JUSTIN LINDNER                                          Section 1: A FRAGILE NEW WORLD                                                                CHAPTER 1   “The Café”        It was a hot Flor...

I think im going to back out of this one. I dont want to drag out thr dead horses and beat them more.

I will, my internet is in and out so I cant say when. Im not on my laptop right now.

Ive liked Alten since Meg. I like sharks and Meg is like Jaws on steroids. Evolutionary biology just interests me, its like the logical alternative to Genesis, I was raised Catholic and learning about evolution is like a breath of fresh air.

"Great, another fundie. Hi JF." Now remember you can't spell fundie without Fun. Of course all that science nonsense is false, we werent monkeys! And evolution is just a theory-like gravity! God doesnt need that scientific evidence stuff, he's magic! The bible IS innerant because the bible...

Ive seen kids and babies that were basically dead. Worse that dead actually. Their brains were cooked but their bodies were still hanging on. If thats the love of god then he can keep it. I call the neonatal intensive care unit(NICU) the "god killer" since god is just an idea shattered there

My novel, Threshold:Part 1 is horror, sci-fi and fantasy all wrapped togther. If anyone is interested please check out my blog. The final draft wont be ready for a little while since I literally just finished writing the rough and still have to edit it but my blog has the first three chapters availa...