Dawn, I read it and over all liked it. I would however suggest a few things. Believe it or not, you offered a lot of information quickly by telling the reader without slowing down and being more descriptive. For one, show me the room from the person's eyes telling me the story. Describe the bedroom ...

Thanks Chris

Thanks Suzanne

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