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Poetry by Numbers: National Poetry Month game

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Newomyn wrote:Love this Poem :wink: Oblivion. Thanks for sharing.
I agree, very probably a great poem. It reminds me of something a college prof of mine once said about catalogs, such as here and in the Iliad, that liking them is a sign of a poetic soul. Unlike in the Iliad, in Whitman's poem the catalog items themselves are highly poetic.

My four is something avant-garde from Edith Sitwell. I couldn't find an annotated copy of this. It really needs footnotes!

Four in the Morning

Cried the navy-blue ghost
Of Mr. Belaker
The allegro Negro cocktail-shaker,
"Why did the cock crow,
Why am I lost,
Down the endless road to Infinity toss'd?
The tropical leaves are whispering white
As water; I race the wind in my flight.
The white lace houses are carried away
By the tide; far out they float and sway.
White is the nursemaid on the parade.
Is she real, as she flirts with me unafraid?
I raced through the leaves as white as water...
Ghostly, flowed over the nursemaid, caught her,
Left her...edging the far-off sand
Is the foam of the sirens' Metropole and Grand;
And along the parade I am blown and lost,
Down the endless road to Infinity toss'd.
The guinea-fowl-plumaged houses sleep...
On one, I saw the lone grass weep,
Where only the whimpering greyhound wind
Chased me, raced me, for what it could find."
And there in the black and furry boughs
How slowly, coldly, old Time grows,
Where the pigeons smelling of gingerbread,
And the spectacled owls so deeply read,
And the sweet ring-doves of curded milk
Watch the Infanta's gown of silk
In the ghost-room tall where the governante
Gesticulates lente and walks andante.
'Madam, Princesses must be obedient;
For a medicine now becomes expedient--
Of five ingredients--a diapente,
Said the governante, fading lente...
In at the window then looked he,
The navy-blue ghost of Mr. Belaker,
The allegro Negro cocktail-shaker--
And his flattened face like the moon saw she--
Rhinoceros-black (a flowing sea!).
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Saffron wrote:It is so fun to see which poems each of us will post. Nice play on words, Oblivion. I am thinking that it should be pretty easy finding poems up to about the number 13 and then the challenge will set in. Any one know of a poem for, say, 26? or 30? See what I mean?!
I'm thinking that poets were not in general great quantifiers, so numbers such as 26 or 30 might be hard to find. But as I mentioned to you, there is an easy out if things get difficult :idea:
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This "five" by Robert Graves.

The Blue Fly

Five summer days, five summer nights,
The ignorant, loutish, giddy blue-fly
Hung without motion on the cling peach
Humming occasionally ‘O my love, my fair one!’
As in the canticles.

Magnified one thousand times, the insect
Looks farcically human; laugh if you will!
Bald head, stage fairy wings, blear eyes,
A caved-in chest, hairy black mandibles,
Long spindly thighs.

The crime was detected on the sixth day.
What then could be said or done? By anyone?
It would have been vindictive, mean, and what-not,
To swat that fly for being a blue-fly,
For debauch of a peach.

Is it fair either, to bring a microscope
To bear on the case, even in search of truth?
Nature, doubtless, has some compelling cause
To glut the carriers of her epidemics -
Nor did the peach complain.

edit: I'm sorry for jumping the gun!
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I will post my 5 now - long as DW got us started. This poem goes with a painting and I love the pair. The poem by William Carlos Williams and painting is Charles Demuth.

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The Great Figure
Among the rain
and lights
I saw the figure 5
in gold
on a red
fire truck
moving
tense
unheeded
to gong clangs
siren howls
and wheels rumbling
through the dark city
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Great 5 poems. I really enjoy William Carlos Williams imagery. you can almost hear the clangs and howls. Here is an Emily Dickinson on that magical time of dawn, 5am.

The Day came slow -- till Five o'clock

The Day came slow -- till Five o'clock --
Then sprang before the Hills
Like Hindered Rubies -- or the Light
A Sudden Musket -- spills --

The Purple could not keep the East --
The Sunrise shook abroad
Like Breadths of Topaz -- packed a Night --
The Lady just unrolled --

The Happy Winds -- their Timbrels took --
The Birds -- in docile Rows
Arranged themselves around their Prince
The Wind -- is Prince of Those --

The Orchard sparkled like a Jew --
How mighty 'twas -- to be
A Guest in this stupendous place --
The Parlor -- of the Day --

Emily Dickinson
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Saffron wrote:I will post my 5 now - long as DW got us started. This poem goes with a painting and I love the pair. The poem by William Carlos Williams and painting is Charles Demuth.

Image

The Great Figure
Among the rain
and lights
I saw the figure 5
in gold
on a red
fire truck
moving
tense
unheeded
to gong clangs
siren howls
and wheels rumbling
through the dark city
Am I correct that the painting is actually titled "I Saw the Figure 5 in Gold"?
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Saffron wrote:I will post my 5 now - long as DW got us started. This poem goes with a painting and I love the pair. The poem by William Carlos Williams and painting is Charles Demuth.
Ah, EKPHRASIS!! Love it!
Gods and spirits are parasitic--Pascal Boyer

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I'm jumping the gun a bit but:


The Sixth Sense

Fine is the wine that is in love with us,
The goodly bread we wait for from the oven,
And woman whom we have possessed, at last,
After we've suffered under yoke her own.

But what to do if a red sunset freezes
Above a sky that's drowning in cold,
Where there is silence and unearthly peace,
What can one do with the immortal ode?

You can't eat it, or drink, or even kiss ...
The moment fled, and next one now hovers,
And we wring hands, but yet once more miss -
We are condemned to miss and miss it over.

Just as a boy, forgetting games and friends,
Sometimes beholds the girls bath in a river
And, knowing nothing of the loving trends,
Is yet tormented by a hidden fever;

As once in time on overgrowing banks
The moisten creature holed in despair
Of self impotence, feeling on its back
Wings - still unformed and very feeble pair, -

So century after century - when, O Christ?
Under the knife of liberal arts and nature
The flesh breaks down and the spirit cries
As they bear organs of the sixth sensation.

Nikolai Stepanovich Gumilev

This being done, I have to admit I don't like the poem at all. I find it rather pretentious and poorly written.
Plus, the "5"s were simply too good!
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It seems poets are early morning folks. I like the beat and rhythm of this poem.

Six a.m. Halfway Tree, Kingston 10
by Adziko Simba


and the chip-chip chop of jelly and cane
the cart man out again and
the windscreens showered with bottles and boxes and mint and
nuts and crackers and crix
and the begging tricks of the shuffling rags
the criminal act of the open palm
the tight-fisted hand behind the glass
slid safely shut and sealed away
from hungry gnawing at the bone
as buses gorge on schoolers crisply ironed, lightly greased and
pressed between the seats
'ductors defying gods of sense swing from doors half hinged and
rattle and bob to the boombox spewing gravely grain
the rockstone voice
vomiting vice,
innocents enticed to
sing along
while elders wilt in far back rows
humming hellfire
these church organs
gripping bosoms and bibles and Jesus and
visioning flocks
washed white as snow to stem the flow
of red down gullies and gutters slashing streets like scars
where taxi cars
weave on speed
heart attacks on wheels
blasting drivers
driven to exceed
driven to exceed
all limits unconstrained
life as passa passa
all untamed
all peeled open
all revealed
the ever static change
the buzz. the heat. the same.
halfway hell and halfway heaven
pull up and come again.
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Saffron wrote:I will post my 5 now - long as DW got us started. This poem goes with a painting and I love the pair. The poem by William Carlos Williams and painting is Charles Demuth.
Am I correct that the painting is actually titled "I Saw the Figure 5 in Gold"?
Yes.
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