Hello everyone I'm sorry that my first real thread has to be a hate thread, but im a little confused on why 50 Shades of Grey had so much success. This is just my opinion, but I really cant think of any ways that this could be a top seller with so many other novels that are much better. I am all in for giving books a chance that's why i read the book as much as I could but when i got to chapter 10 i couldnt take it anymore, I find it extremly repetitive not to mention dull. Im also not sure why but the more i read it the more i thought how much the book reminded me of Twilight
To prove the repetition:
Is it just me? What do you guys think? Bestseller worthy?
To prove the repetition:
I have discovered that Ana says "Jeez" 81 times and "oh my" 72 times. She "blushes" or "flushes" 125 times, including 13 that are "scarlet," 6 that are "crimson," and one that is "stars and stripes red." (I can't even imagine.) Ana "peeks up" at Christian 13 times, and there are 9 references to Christian's "hooded eyes," 7 to his "long index finger," and 25 to how "hot" he is (including four recurrences of the epic declarative sentence "He's so freaking hot."). Christian's "mouth presses into a hard line" 10 times. Characters "murmur" 199 times, "mutter" 49 times, and "whisper" 195 times (doesn't anyone just talk?), "clamber" on/in/out of things 21 times, and "smirk" 34 times. Christian and Ana also "gasp" 46 times and experience 18 "breath hitches," suggesting a need for prompt intervention by paramedics. Finally, in a remarkable bit of symmetry, our hero and heroine exchange 124 "grins" and 124 "frowns"... which, by the way, seems an awful lot of frowning for a woman who experiences "intense," "body-shattering," "delicious," "violent," "all-consuming," "turbulent," "agonizing" and "exhausting" orgasms on just about every page.
Is it just me? What do you guys think? Bestseller worthy?