that's called The Gazebo if my peeps could check out and skim over and see if anyone could give me any pointers. I'm a new writer, and I'd love some feedback. It's sci fi fantasy. It's about a guy named Ron Lampson who uses a gazebo to time travel back to World War I and try to stop it from happening hoping some aliens won't get in the way along the way. I hope you like it!
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